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Warm rays of sunlight
Filtered through the pines' needles
Dance on a spiderweb
2007-09-16 22:34
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rays and light? it seems doubly...
sunlight
through pines' needles -
a webdance
people know pines...so, there are almost spiders
[ I'm not blaiming the 6 syllables in the third line - crossing the line "17", because the look out of the window is more important than the window-frame, isn't it? ]
;))
Heike Gewi
By hege
Posted 2007-10-22 12:29
staring at the "i"/in "blame"/readers and chicks...
[my haiku is only a funny mention of Issa's "a-long-day" and a correction of "blaiming" - my typing must get better... ;-) ]
By hege
Posted 2007-10-23 09:21
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